RESOLVED: s8e5 Problems: The robot fight scene is too long. Solution: I want to fill the episode with more paladin bonding than the robot fight; namely I’d like to cut back on it enough to introduce the drama that Keith hasn’t woken up yet at the end of the episode. All of the paladins are there to hear the information, informed that it may just take time for Keith to fully recover. Shiro dismisses the paladins to go back and rest, as they all need it; but sits down on Keith’s bed and remains there. Briefly, we’re met with a scene of Adam in his grays about to roll in to meet with Shiro, but seeing the look in Shiro’s eyes, smiles and changes his mind. Addition: I also think that, when Shiro establishes his connection to Atlas that there should be another reference to the white lion with him, starting with an overlay of the white lion appearing with his yellow eyes, and a small roar echoing through the beginning of the transformation scene, and ending on a bigger roar when the transformation is complete. I would consider this as “finalizing” the white lion plot.
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Problems: The robot fight scene is too long.
Solution: I want to fill the episode with more paladin bonding than the robot fight; namely I’d like to cut back on it enough to introduce the drama that Keith hasn’t woken up yet at the end of the episode. All of the paladins are there to hear the information, informed that it may just take time for Keith to fully recover. Shiro dismisses the paladins to go back and rest, as they all need it; but sits down on Keith’s bed and remains there. Briefly, we’re met with a scene of Adam in his grays about to roll in to meet with Shiro, but seeing the look in Shiro’s eyes, smiles and changes his mind.
Addition: I also think that, when Shiro establishes his connection to Atlas that there should be another reference to the white lion with him, starting with an overlay of the white lion appearing with his yellow eyes, and a small roar echoing through the beginning of the transformation scene, and ending on a bigger roar when the transformation is complete. I would consider this as “finalizing” the white lion plot.