RESOLVED: s9e3 Problems: Splitting up the team is just stupid,. There’s no reason for them to be separated for this portion of the series, and barely a rationale for it in the upcoming episode. In addition, the entire plotline with the olkari ends on a totally bogus note Solution: A brief episode rewrite:
Since Earth had been set free, it had become top priority n to get in contact with the Olkari, but mysteriously none of the messages are getting through even after they’re able to confirm that their satellites are able to reach that far. This is addressed in a scene between Shiro, Adam, and Veronica. Adam and Coran leave to resolve some signal issues in the communications room, leaving Veronica and Shiro a moment to talk about Adam. Veronica teases that they “seem to be getting along” before Shiro reveals with a smile that they’d both moved on. Iverson announces they’re approaching Olkarion now and Voltron goes down
The Weblum catches the Atlas off guard unexpectedly, shifting a loose satellite board in the communication room and knocking Coran unconscious from the impact. Adam ends up, consequently, stuck in the room with Coran because of how the board and Coran fell and the satellite board disconnected.
The plot continues normally except that the issue becomes that no one is able to contact the atlas temporarily. Pidge pursues the same information, but this time faster (condensing the episode heavily). The same information about the robeast is learned, and in a last moment, Pidge is also able to uncover the potential location of the Olkari. The weblum destroys the Planet and the Atlas sets off again.
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Problems: Splitting up the team is just stupid,. There’s no reason for them to be separated for this portion of the series, and barely a rationale for it in the upcoming episode. In addition, the entire plotline with the olkari ends on a totally bogus note
Solution: A brief episode rewrite:
Since Earth had been set free, it had become top priority n to get in contact with the Olkari, but mysteriously none of the messages are getting through even after they’re able to confirm that their satellites are able to reach that far. This is addressed in a scene between Shiro, Adam, and Veronica. Adam and Coran leave to resolve some signal issues in the communications room, leaving Veronica and Shiro a moment to talk about Adam. Veronica teases that they “seem to be getting along” before Shiro reveals with a smile that they’d both moved on. Iverson announces they’re approaching Olkarion now and Voltron goes down
The Weblum catches the Atlas off guard unexpectedly, shifting a loose satellite board in the communication room and knocking Coran unconscious from the impact. Adam ends up, consequently, stuck in the room with Coran because of how the board and Coran fell and the satellite board disconnected.
The plot continues normally except that the issue becomes that no one is able to contact the atlas temporarily. Pidge pursues the same information, but this time faster (condensing the episode heavily). The same information about the robeast is learned, and in a last moment, Pidge is also able to uncover the potential location of the Olkari. The weblum destroys the Planet and the Atlas sets off again.