RESOLVED: s9e4 Problems: So Many Details. This e the storyline that make this episode grating. Worst of all is the treatement shiro receives in this episode, working as the ultimate proof that Shiro is being torn away from the other paladins Solution: Another rewritepisode’s plotline is great, but there are pieces scattered through out
Due to concerns about the safety of the Olkari in the particular region they’re suspected to be located at, team Voltron scouts ahead to the new location, splitting up Voltron and Atlas more reasonably for this episode. For the most part this episode plays out the same–the olkari location turns out to have been another trap laid. During this time, “Keith” reports that the Olkari left a bread crumb trail to their location, and that Voltron is going to pursue the path alone a little longer; effectively slowing down the Atlas’s progress.
The story follows Veronica and Acxa the same way as before. By the time Shiro gets the second transmission, Adam asks Shiro if something’s the matter, which Shiro declines. By the third transmission, Shiro knows exactly what’s wrong, and demands full throttle to Voltron’s location.
The story on the toxic planet follows also the same plotline up until Zethrid, Keith, Shiro, and Acxa all meet at the Volcano. Acxa tries to reason with Zethrid, but Zethrid still wants revenge for what Keith did to Ezor. Keith screams, “Shiro get out of here!” Zethrid’s gun flares with light. Acxa cries out to Zethrid. Before anyone knows what happens, the gun flies out of Zethrid’s hand as it fires, in the exact same moment as another gun fires from Veronica’s location. Keith escapes and stumbles into Shiro’s arms.
Zethrid, startled by the gun and shot by Veronica, stumbles back and begins to fall, but is caught at the last minute bu someone nobody expected: Ezor smiles and grunts, the damage clear on her face: “Sorry I didn’t come sooner.” Keith and Shiro help the two of them up.
s8e5 "The Grudge"
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Problems: So Many Details. This e the storyline that make this episode grating. Worst of all is the treatement shiro receives in this episode, working as the ultimate proof that Shiro is being torn away from the other paladins
Solution: Another rewritepisode’s plotline is great, but there are pieces scattered through out
Due to concerns about the safety of the Olkari in the particular region they’re suspected to be located at, team Voltron scouts ahead to the new location, splitting up Voltron and Atlas more reasonably for this episode. For the most part this episode plays out the same–the olkari location turns out to have been another trap laid. During this time, “Keith” reports that the Olkari left a bread crumb trail to their location, and that Voltron is going to pursue the path alone a little longer; effectively slowing down the Atlas’s progress.
The story follows Veronica and Acxa the same way as before. By the time Shiro gets the second transmission, Adam asks Shiro if something’s the matter, which Shiro declines. By the third transmission, Shiro knows exactly what’s wrong, and demands full throttle to Voltron’s location.
The story on the toxic planet follows also the same plotline up until Zethrid, Keith, Shiro, and Acxa all meet at the Volcano. Acxa tries to reason with Zethrid, but Zethrid still wants revenge for what Keith did to Ezor. Keith screams, “Shiro get out of here!” Zethrid’s gun flares with light. Acxa cries out to Zethrid. Before anyone knows what happens, the gun flies out of Zethrid’s hand as it fires, in the exact same moment as another gun fires from Veronica’s location. Keith escapes and stumbles into Shiro’s arms.
Zethrid, startled by the gun and shot by Veronica, stumbles back and begins to fall, but is caught at the last minute bu someone nobody expected: Ezor smiles and grunts, the damage clear on her face: “Sorry I didn’t come sooner.” Keith and Shiro help the two of them up.