RESOLVED: s9e5 Adjustment: I’m moving “Day Forty-seven” up to this episode! The whiplash caused by the way episodes are laid out originally here makes it a bit uncomfortable to have the story go from such heavy implications to two very light hearted episodes in a row. As such, I’m judging the episode assuming this new order
Problems: My major issue with this episode is just a lack of Shiro being a normal person. Other than that, I do think this is generally a fun episode that allows for anything. Solution: really, just the addition of Shiro into any of the casual scenes. In particular I think he should be found hanging out with Keith in the lunch area, and genuinely excited about Kinkade’s video footage and requesting that he share some of his recordings later. “They might just prove useful for Garrison records.” Addition: The Olkari being pursued further should be mentioned, and I think it would actually be nice if this episode also ended on the people being found: nothing big, just a brief announcement over the intercom from Adam announcing that they’ve found the Olkari settlement with a beautiful little tune to end the episode on.
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s8e6 "Genesis"
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Adjustment: I’m moving “Day Forty-seven” up to this episode! The whiplash caused by the way episodes are laid out originally here makes it a bit uncomfortable to have the story go from such heavy implications to two very light hearted episodes in a row. As such, I’m judging the episode assuming this new order
Problems: My major issue with this episode is just a lack of Shiro being a normal person. Other than that, I do think this is generally a fun episode that allows for anything.
Solution: really, just the addition of Shiro into any of the casual scenes. In particular I think he should be found hanging out with Keith in the lunch area, and genuinely excited about Kinkade’s video footage and requesting that he share some of his recordings later. “They might just prove useful for Garrison records.”
Addition: The Olkari being pursued further should be mentioned, and I think it would actually be nice if this episode also ended on the people being found: nothing big, just a brief announcement over the intercom from Adam announcing that they’ve found the Olkari settlement with a beautiful little tune to end the episode on.